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No Orchestra could play my heart as she can
Although there are no words to describe this
A fool can always try
No longer do i bleed for my sadness or pains
Now i bleed when she asks for my blood
But she wishes me to heal
The feeling whenever the thought of her comes
Its like the world is on its knees, at my command
Nothing could go wrong
But fear takes its hold, "History Repeats" after all
And no pain shall go unsuffered as i know well
Even though i know all this and fear it rightfully so
I do know this one fact;
My love for her will always stand, no matter what comes.
©2008-2009 ~Onikage-Ninja
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Author's Comments

Heh, well this comes as a little annoyance to some, pleasure to less and a reason to hate to many.
My care? slim to none, so please dont complain, compliments accepted whole-heartedly though.

Anyway I wrote this in one of my rarest moods, a good one.
Thinking about Kayla (hence the title) and my peice im going to write for her, for those who dont know, I write a peice for any girl i go out or fall inlove with, but with kayla im planning to write nothing less then a perfect peice and i may post it, but i doubt ill post my older ones.

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Nice poem.
Too bad there was never truth to it.
Good to see you're still writing though, from your more recent ones it's clear that you're improving.

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Tell me how could you compromise yourself like this? Tell me how could you blame anyone else when you arent really committed? ....You had hopes & dreams of a day where everything everything everything would come together; you wouldnt have to be so scared.

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